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Inelegant. who take their notions of characters from the learn

ed; but also the better sort must, by this means, lose some part at least of their desire of fame, when they find it promiscuously bestowed on the meritorious and undeserving.

Desires of pleasure usher in temptation, and the growth of disorderly passions is forwarded.

The sun approaching melts the snow, and breaks the icy fetters of the main, where vast sea monsters pierce through floating islands, with arms which can withstand the crystal rock; whilst others, that of themselves

seem great as islands, are by their bulk alone armed E 3

Better thus.

racters from the learned, are affected by this prostitution of praise; the better sort must also by this means lose some part at least of their desire of

fame, when they find it promiscuously bestowed on the meritorious and on the undeserving.

Desires of pleasure usher in temptation, and forward the growth of disorderly passions.

The sun approaching melts the snow, and breaks the icy fetters of the main. Here vast sea

monsters pierce through floating islands, with arms which can withstand the crystal rock; whilst others, that of themselves seem great as islands, are by their bulk

against

Inelegant. against all but man, but man, whose superiority over creatures of such stupendous size and force should make him mindful of his privilege of reason; and force him humbly to adore the great Composer of these wondrous frames,

and the Author of his own superior wisdom.

Boast not thyself of to-morrow; for thou knowest not what a day may bring forth; and for the same reason, despair not of to-morrow; for it may bring forth good as well as evil; which is a ground for not vexing thyself with imaginary fears; for the impending black cloud, which is regarded with so

Better thus.

alone armed against all but man. The superiority which he possesses over creatures of such stupendous size and force, should make him mindful of his privilege of reason; and force him humbly to adore the great Composer of these wondrous frames, and the Author of his own superior wisdom.

Boast not thyself of to-morrow; thou knowest not what a day may bring forth. For the same reason, despair not of tomorrow; it may bring forth good as well as evil. Vex not thyself with imaginary fears. The impending black cloud,. which is regarded with so much dread, may pass by harmless; or though much

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OF STRENGTH IN THE STRUCTURE OF SENTENCES..

1. To promote the strength of a sentence divest it of all redundant words. It is a general maxim, that any words which do not add some importance to the meaning of a sentence, always spoil it.

All

that

that can be supplied in the mind is better left out in

the expression.

Ex. "

I went home, full of a great many serious reflections." Better thus,

"I went home full of serious reflections."

2. As sentences should be cleared of redundant words, so also of redundant members. As every word ought to present a new idea, so every member ought to contain a new thought.

Ex. "The very first discovery of it strikes the mind with inward joy, and spreads delight through all its faculties."

In this instance little or nothing is added by the second member of the sentence to what was already expressed in the first.

3. Attend particularly to the use of copulatives, relatives, and all the particles employed for transition and connection. These little words but, and, which, whose, where, &c. are frequently the most important words of any; they are the joints or hinges upon which all sentences turn, and of course, much, both of their gracefulness and strength, must depend on them. The varieties in using them are indeed so infinite, that no particular system of rules respecting them can be given. But some observations may be made; as

First.

First. What is called splitting of particles, or separating a preposition from the noun which it governs, is always to be avoided.

EXAMPLE." As the strength of our cause doth not depend upon, so neither is it to be decided by, any critical points of history, chronology, or language."

Here we feel a sort of pain in being obliged to rest on the Preposition itself, which carries no sig nificancy, till it is joined to its proper Substantive.

Secondly. Some writers needlessly multiply demonstrative and relative particles by the frequent use of such phraseology as this: "There is nothing - which disgusts us sooner than the empty pomp of language." In introducing a subject, or laying down a proposition, to which we demand particular attention, this sort of style is very proper; but in the ordinary current of discourse it is better to express ourselves more simply and shortly: "Nothing dis gusts us sooner than the empty pomp of language."

Thirdly. Other writers make a practice of omitting the Relative, in a phrase of a different kind from the former, where they think the meaning can be understood without it: " The man I love. "The

conquests we made." But though this elliptical style be intelligible and is allowable in conversation

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